~The Lonely Vocalist~
he sang for himself , not for others to hear
to button out the rue , he could no longer bear
he was lonesome , with nobody to fear
felt better , with his insides much clear
he sang ideating her , his only dear
no matter if now , it is a dream mere ..
he sang for himself, n for his only friend
for whom he waited , every rule to bend
was perfect for him , the rightmost blend
made only 1 mistake , one he couldnt fend
one that ruined them , one he could never mend
heard time would heal , the trauma didnt end
so he sings , not for others to commend
but in hope , one day his feels would be send ..
27 aug 07
5 30 pm
21 comments:
I wish that day comes sooner[:)]....waise Paul da, writing such an emotional poem......Ye baat kuch hazam nahi hui.[:P]
abe sale .. to kya mai comedy likhta hun !! [:O]
waise tx for reading ..
u conjure up some very beautiful and touching flow of words.bravo!!
yo
kuch hooohhaaa
unexpected :P
gr8 work
unexpected !! [:(] [:O]
sala tareef karega .. wo bhi ro ro ke [:D]
awesome!!!
one thing that kept ringing my head all along while reading the poem, that, mostly fiction is the result of real life inspiration,was thr any to evoke the beautiful poetic dove outta u?
this one is a surely a master piece!
well u r the 3rd 1 asking this Q ..
but being a poet urself u really messed up the Q in a sense that u made it very tough for me to answer :)
lesser mortals asked " kaun hai ? "
to them i answer wat u mentioned "fiction hai .. BUT fiction is the result of real life inspiration"
do u think sm1 can conjure such lines without IDEATING sm1 ?? !!
[:D]
n tx ... i was eagerly waiting for ur comment ..
becuase u rarely disappoint me [:D]
n POETIC DOVE !!
wow !!
my poems are my pensieves, for they will drown u, as soon as u plunge in, to a world filled wid my corresponding 'factual life incident' and a quick snooping into my mind's irrational yet logical gush of grieved emotional outflow...
they r sort of distributaries that bypass the lethal emotional-poison from blocking my heart's vessels...
ok, i wd be very grateful if ur majesty wd satiate the inquisitive lesser mortals, i being one of those, who is she ? ;)
huha pic chosen! yo paul!
abe ... !!
wouldnt have i answered that in the 1st place if wanted or rather i myslef knew !! [:)]
han .. pic ko leke mai bahut confused tha .. kafi fight mara iske liye .. [:)]
really unbelievable.. awsome.. cnt blieve dats u!
:D
ty sentos dear :)
very touchy.....you gave it a nice sensuous feel and i like the ways it ends.
but paul da...inni soni poem kis kudi vaaste likhi hai???!!! :P
hehe ..
fictitious KUDI [:D] ..
ab peace hai ..
waise i have written it in a 3rd persons perspective ... which hints smthing !! :D
great work dude.
oye tx susodia dude !!
unexpected new reader ! :D
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